Fasman, Jon: The Geographer's Library
The text of The Geographer's Library purports to be Paul's first-person account of his investigation of the Pühapäev matter, written at the behest of a mysterious "H." Interspersed throughout his account are sixteen historical chapters. Each details some episode in the usually blood-soaked history of an artefact of significance to alchemists (a playing card, a carved wooden triptych, etc.), and ends with a more formal valuation of the object. The artefacts so detailed do not figure directly in the story Paul tells, but they are connected with the secret of Pühapäev's death.
The alternation between Paul's account and these intervening historical chapters makes for a schizophrenic novel. Unfortunately, the two different types of chapters differ from one another in more than subject matter. The historical chapters, perhaps surprisingly, are by far the more interesting in the book. They are well-written, vividly imagined self-standing pieces that quickly grab the reader's interest and very often end with a surprise buried in the formal description of the artefact under discussion. Paul's account, on the other hand--the meat of the book--is comparatively poorly written. The dialogue is often stilted and unnatural.
"I won't pry too much by asking you about this music teacher, but if you're fond enough to blush over her, it must be something indeed. Good luck."Certain details in the story don't ring true. (After knowing Jadid for years, for example, Paul has never asked him about, or heard about from other students, the origin of the Professor's unusual accent? History departments employ their own night watchmen?) Some passages in the book don't seem to have any point to them (Paul's stop at a Portuguese bar at which he's refused service; his four-page conversation with an old girlfriend). None of Fasman's characters is developed enough to inspire emotional attachment. And Paul is never placed in any jeopardy worthy of the name: he may be frightened at various points in the story, that is, but the reader is never frightened for him. Finally, Fasman's story is just not very interesting. This is a shame, because as the historical chapters of the book make clear, he can write well, and he's clearly done his research for the book. There is a kernel of a very good story here which I wish additional rounds of editing had brought further to light.
"Thank you."
Review summary: Paul Tomm, a recent graduate of Wickenden University, is working as a reporter at a weekly paper in sleepy Lincoln, Connecticut. The job is routine until Paul is assigned to write the obituary of Jaan Pühapäev, a reclusive Lincoln resident who was also a Wickenden professor. No one seem to have known much about Pühapäev, with the exception of Pühapäev's neighbor Hannah, with whom Paul becomes romantically involved. The text of The Geographer's Library purports to be Paul's account of his investigation of the Pühapäev matter. Interspersed throughout his account are sixteen historical chapters, each of which details an episode in the history of an artefact of significance to alchemists. The historical chapters are well-written, vividly imagined self-standing pieces that grab the reader's attention. Paul's account is comparatively poorly written. The dialogue is stilted; certain details don't ring true; and Fasman's characters aren't developed enough to inspire emotional attachment.
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